Daily Life Trapped in a Zombie VR Game

I'm sure if I just missed it but there's no going into the game or anything.. I found the writing close together and tbh I got confused really fast. Some words like evident are overused, like in the very first paragraph of the first chapter. The characters are very unique and development is ok. I recommend hiring an editor because I see a lot of well.. grammar errors, etc. Keep writing though, your creative expression is a very healthy habit!

For an SAO parody...This isn't bad. The Kirito here seems better if you ask me. The VR logic is somehow vague for me at first but then I understood it after reading a bit far off onto chapter 20.But overall, This puts a smile on my face ;)

The first thing that stood out to me was how well this is written. I gotta admit, the author does an amazing job of bringing out his characters and storyline. Well done

This novel is very well written, especially I am very satisfied with the pacing which many authors struggle with which is quite surprising. If you have time and you want to read something refreshing, give it a go.

I was reading a story, but really I was watching an epic action packed movie being played out before my eyes! Loved how well developed the characters are as well as the world they're apart of. A definite endorsement to keep reading, I know I will ;)

The very first thing that I noticed when I started to read this were the many grammatical errors. Normally if it's just a few, I wouldn't mind. However, there are enough errors that I had a hard time staying focused on the story itself. The grammar could use quite a bit of improvement. With that said... I do like the Author's creativity with the story. It's definitely something I'm not used to reading, but I would still encourage new readers to give the story a shot.

The raw idea of this story is just simply amazing! I have never read something like this, and what makes it more alluring to read is the execution! And I can tell this will grow more than we expect! Cheers to the author!

The world-building and setting development is done really well, and I can see the aspects of Tornado's character:) I really liked SAO, and I can see the inspo from it! some errors, but all in all an amazing zombie story!