Curtains of the heart

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Protagonist disappeared 10 chapters in, just checks in every 8 chapters for a cameo to publish a new game, then gives the protagonist spot to his livestreamer girlfriend so she can play games in advance while everyone else watches in envy. Moderate spelling and grammar, good update speed but aside from that the characters are unlikeable and there’s nothing particularly original. Better go and read Almighty Video Game Designer, same plot much better done

This is a very interesting story. Although the beginning is somewhat chaotic, but then the improvements are seen. The situations that the protagonist will face will serve him for his future development.

This is a great novel and have a lot of potential and, to people that don’t like gender bender this won’t be for you. Btw damm you author now I have a thing for gender bend xP

Are we getting more chapters because it’s been 19 days what do you have a schedule because if I took the advance chapters is to be able to read, but having only two chapters from 388 to 390 and not be able to read them. It’s kind of frustrating, I don’t know the circumstances or the reason why did the delay but as a reader, I would appreciate a heads up or some information telling us readers this information. [information being there will be a delay of certain chapters for a certain amount of time] which we as funds will be happy to give and support.

Straight to the point.The story is interesting and raises the idea of ​​an MC that will serve as support for the "heroes" to save worlds in order to save their own. Nothing more than mere survival, but it is unlikely that they would risk their necks on other worlds (maybe just the "hero complex")Here we start with the first "stumble" for me. The MC looked promising, logical and conservative asking why would he want to risk his life? That dialogue came from logic, it seemed perfect to me until the "director" gives his daughter to be his fiancée (No money, resources, skills, NOTHING) and the MC accepts ... sigh.Second "stumble" the MC is drugged (actually unconscious) to do a test of who knows what and there they discover his potential for support and kindly ask him (they force him) to accept. Not so bad, right? Well, the relationship with the first heroine has to do with this because she somehow falls in love with the MC at that time. (MC with blocked memories). The MC as a normal human feels uncomfortable with this but lets it pass because she is his "fiancee" ...Third "stumble" MC and his relationships go from 0 to 100, too fast and forced. It is also kind of simple because as long as you are a woman he will not do anything to you. (A princess is constantly insulting and denigrating him and his fiancee who is the heroine who owns the party lets it pass as if nothing happened) I'm sure that if the princess was a prince they would have already eliminated him. (This is the problem of the Harem in general and although I like the harem I have always found this annoying so it does not even serve to justify it)Conclusion: Disappointed. I couldn't get past a certain chapter and therefore the bugs that I found can be fixed later but all of the above made me quit.I consider his other novel much better than irony that it has a better romance and even more logical than this.

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