Cultivation Supreme

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A very well made story with strong basis that look like a superhero back story.
The story doesn't stop on one part for 10 million years snd gets right to the point.
Good story :]

I think the author has enough experience reading stories about cultivation. Seeing the writing that I think flows smoothly without breaking the flow. Great start to the first chapter. Unfortunately, the chaotic chapter structure is either due to Webnovel's fault or the author's, making the reading experience less enjoyable.

The use of uppercase and lowercase letters also affects the beginning of the paragraph and after the period. At least, webnovels have such a format.

I've read it all the way to chapter five, and it seems like the author needs to really pay attention to the chapter structure which is really messed up. A good story doesn't seem interesting because of that kind of thing. It is deeply regretted.

I like the fact that the grades and cultivation levels are all conveniently listed at the start, that way, no one would get lost and even if they did, they could just go back to the first chapter. This is one basic thing that many cultivation writers tend to miss. Also, the story is great, of course it couldn't rival Super Gene or Vampire System but it's good all on its own. Great job author! Don't drop it, this is bound to come far :)

In the first few chapters aren't that good. but after the chapter 10 the story progress,the chapter 17 is the best way to put it. author keep it up

Today's chapter is better the then the last one in my opinion, well I liked the forbidden fruit part mostly. Yuan was excited from the excitement that his fantasy will nw became a reality

Best plot,good relationship, Overall Perfect !!
Author please continue  .. ... ...

this book is gold and has good potential just wish he can finish it