Cultivation Start with Being the Creator of the World

I got to chapter 34 and can say that the writing has improved, and seems like a good story so far. I am looking forward to how this book will go.

Overall I feel that the world building and character development is done just right for the beginning of the book thus far.

As for story development I personally like the path taken where there is a goal seen already for the plot, with an easy path to continuing further.

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I really like and enjoy this book, i just hope you can fix a smaal problem, the chapters are mixed up, it doesn't follow in order, for instance ch1 and ch3 follow and ch2 and ch4 follow

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I love the story so far and hope you will continue writing this novel and not drop it i can see this lasting a long time and I like how you made the mc op

I shall shameless vote my self a 5 on update, thank you for reading on my add free link as a editor and translator and also a author this book is quite good 140 Chapter left to go!!

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