Let's see. The story goes off interestingly, maybe the author could make the flow go smoother int he beginning of the first chap, but out of that I didn't see any mistake.
Grammar great, plot amazing, world build is still waited. Now we only need to wait what will happen.
A very great start to a very interesting story I hope you continue this story it has very great potential for becoming a grate series cant wait for the next chapter.
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Let's see. The story goes off interestingly, maybe the author could make the flow go smoother int he beginning of the first chap, but out of that I didn't see any mistake.
Grammar great, plot amazing, world build is still waited. Now we only need to wait what will happen.
Good job dear... Author!:)