CROWNLESS KING

The first chapter was pretty much flawless, so good job on that in terms of Grammer and punctuation. It establishes the mc's personality greatly, showing his goal, ambition, drive, and rhyme, reason, everything. It showed multiple forms of conflict and comedy, and also showed a ton of world building as well as mystery. It flowed smoothly and read like a full on professional novel. Good job author, this is one of the greatest first chaps I have seen.

Me won't lie, the prologue itself was catchy🤭 As I decided to try it, I basically wanted to skip the prologue, but then, I reconsidered. I read it and it was catchy, making you want to read the next chapter and next and next🤭🤭🤭

The start is impressive. The flow seemed good and the conversation also paced well. The author did a good job in giving explanations wherever necessary and the writing quality is also good. Keep up the good work author

This novel is fantastic. Love every detail of it. This is truly creative. More episodes  need to be published. I am loving it and I’m cannot wait to see how it all ends. This novel is really what I needed.

The zombie had white hair tied in a top knot, no eye balls or nose and bandages covering part of its rotting face. It was dressed in a samurai gi and a blue scarf which partially covered his mouth. Fighting them were 2 identical 6" 20 year old Samurai's with a katana in one hand and a wakizashi in the other.

"Exactly." If I had a face I would have been smirking.

Halos may kalumaan ang lahat ng kagamitan ang nakikita ko. Pati ang ilaw ng kanilang bahay parang panahon pa ni Heneral Luna sa luma. Hindi ganito ang inasahan kong bahay ni Anna. Wala naman siyang sinabi sa'kin na mahilig pala sa lumang kagamitan ang mga magulang niya. Edi sana dinala ko ang radyo sa bahay. Oh my!

(Sa pagluwas nila ng manila mahahanap nila kaya agad ang mga magulang ni xenon)

"The twenty-ninth of December of two thousand and eleven, a date that no human alive until today, would forget, although most of those humans had already died in different circumstances, the earth ceased to be what it was, due to the fires of nuclear weapons that began at midnight on December twenty-ninth."(Storyteller)