A crappy novel. Honestly just read it yourself and judge. But in my opinion this novel is nonsensical, MC has 260IQ still needs a system and acts like a cringy retard. This is a purely Quanity over Quality novel.
Shameless review from me, this is a novel inspired by one-piece, Konosuba, and many Isekai genres. I have high hopes for my own novel to be what I expected "make your imaginations come true." I do not force the heck out of y'all to read, but like all many authors, I'd be pleased if you read it and give it a critic or comments. To me, my writing need some improvement, and yes, this book's words are also modified/paraphrased by AI, I'm not afraid to admit it, but there are my own original creative words. Regardless, I used AI to both study and improve my writing and grammar incorrections. Pleased to know more about your thoughts.
Honestly its subpar writing....story had potential but it just wasnt developed well. The MC and his interactions seem forced...they dont feel natural. MC is too naive, too beta, too awkward and just not confident. I mean he has the most beautiful wife but he cant hold a conversation with other women easily. He keeps asking can I hug you, can i kiss you? and it feels too stupid when she has already shown him that its okay....I mean wife keeps helping him grow but he lacks ambition. You cant feel drive from him to grow etc. She tells him to read and gain knowledge but it didnt show him doing that...honestly story is not written well. Around chapter 75 I just couldnt anymore
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