First, i've only read the free chapters, so maybe it is building up in these.Everybody in this novel is absurdly tall, now you may say, it's okay that the 3 mentioned characters are above 6ft 5 tall, but I think it describes good what is missing here. There is a bunch off good ideas and concepts, but they are sadly put into a imaginary world, where the MC is the only person who can think a bit out of the box. Well not even that, everybody else would have to be plain stupid to miss this many points in the story.a bit similar to moonlight sculpturer, which is also not a novel, where logic plays a big role.This review is part of my new agenda: every novel off my list gets an review ( good Or now so)While my resume sounds really evil, I have to admit I really wanted this story to develop, just like you see your kid taking it's first steps, and you hope they take another, and not to crawl again.
Stolen from Ryuugi’s The Games We Play, RWBY & Gamer fic on Spacebattleshttps://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rwby-the-gamer-the-games-we-play-disk-five.341621/
i love the way you wrote this story.it makes me want to keep on reading on and on . keep it up,this dook is a dimond.there is a lot more i want to say but im not good at describing what i think.
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