Terrific novel. Needs a little push so that people can see it for the gem that it really is. Highly recommend giving it a shot for mystery/detective work genre lovers.
Nice premise, reading about a villain definitely has tons of potential, but this isn't a villain, it's just an edgy powertrip fantasy.Also, "lol" has no place in a novel, especially not if ou want it taken seriously.The world background is good, the little we know of it anyways, seems like other planets are populated, and the whole hero vs villain dynamic has a lot of potential, as it always has.I'll be stopping here however, no point reading more when i already think the MC is pathetic, not because of his killing or his god complex, but because of how he talks, how he acts and many other things.
lately i kinda like a villain story where the heroines can hears the villain(mc) inner thought. and this novel is one of it. not only that, this novel shows us that inner voice getting heard by the heroines can have another implication
124k views and not one review? Are you srs well at least I have the honor of being first review can’t wait for volume 2. 140 characters 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
I was shocked to see nefertari meeting prince yali... you have explained clearly how much prince ramses loves nefertari dear author... I hope this is all just a conspiracy and the prince wouldn't take any rash actions against his queen... One suggestion break your long paragraphs into small ones. vocabulary is good
This story is a great disappointment ,I expected much more than that . For a person who was hailed as the strongest in his previous life ,the MC sure is dumb . Not to forget to mention the grammatical errors . Editing ,lots and lots of editing , this story needs a hell lot of editing. The plot is interesting but the characters are horribly designed .
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