It's fantastic, but the pace is a little bit sluggish, and the main character is a little too passive. Additionally, the updates come a little more slowly than usual. The most I can give it is 4.1 stars, but I'm going to round it up in recognition of the author's hard work.
Great novel!! Love reading it everyday. The character development is really interesting as well as the story that comes along with it. 10/10 would recommend.
I liked it at first until the mc got a massive nerf for being OP despite the fact that there is mind magic and even an average level user can read minds and control people (the mc has no defense even with the system). Then the mc has his system stolen, not by a fellow reincarnator but by an ex slave who was cursed to be stuck weak. The mc was taking the brute force path with some magic assistance in a world with mind attacks which he has no defense, power sealing curses which he has no defense, and apparently even power stealing which he has no effective defense. But yeah he’s OP and needs to be nerfed repeatably
I don't like writing negative reviews, but I sincerely hope you take this criticism well and not personally for future improvement.The main character is a "Mary Sue." Plain as day. Everything goes her way to the point where it's hard to enjoy any development in the story. Spoiler: she can turn food into energy despite being a cyborg and originally having to be recharged. The only obstacle is that she needs to blend into human society, which isn't that much of a challenge because of the amount of tools she has at her disposal.The plot is missing motivation and drive. What is her purpose? Well, it's to save humanity from the evil robots, but why? The only motive she has is because she was formerly a human, but the novel doesn't depict any emotion or drive out of it.Yes, I expected an overpowered MC, but it isn't done in a way that's enjoyable to read. For comparison, the difference between the anime, "The Eminence in Shadow," and this novel is that the MC has a clear description of his goal and how to reach it with obstacles that keep the viewer invested in the development. How? He literally creates his own problems, albeit in a weird way, in order to not only entertain himself but also to further reach his goal, which is to become The Eminence in Shadow (Watch the anime, it'll make sense to you).The grammar is mostly good with some typos.The description of items, environments, and battles are good, but the characters could use some more detail.I will still keep reading to notice any changes, and I would highly suggest an introduction with a proper prologue as well as a rewrite to the first number of chapters.Again, please don't take the criticism personally, I only wish for your improvement.
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