I’m all caught up with this story now. It’s been an interesting read so far.Grammar-wise it has some errors here and there that makes it a bit confusing but it becomes clearer if you consider the context of the sentence.It’s not a bad translation better than most even but there is still room for improvement.Personally, I’m wondering about the direction of the story. If it will end with Liyue or involve nations like Inazuma and Sumeru in the future.
"Hua Ha Ha, you are just so helpless. You can sweeten your story with whatever spices you want, nothing will chance the fact of how lame you are. Come on, you just spend a whole day with the probably the most beautiful girl on earth, and you are doing nothing!" Cao Fan hasn't stop laughing since Lu Yan told him what he is doing the whole day.
"It seems you have done something unusual. Banishing the Incubus with a blood binding. While that is considered a dangerous way to do a banishing, there is something less known about it." She said.
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