I like the story and the movement of the plot line. He got the system - YesCompleting missions -YesSlow development - yes (probably because of chapter length is small)World development - No (hardly say anything about the place he live in. is it still earth or other?)character - under developed My only con of this story is MC character. He was doing odd jobs in university to do the living, suddenly ine day he got the system and become studious I can accept that but this also changes his character as a whole he become completely emotionless unless author want to create some comedic moment, he looks down on his friends for playing games and stuff like normal college students do (which he also do before system). one instance in recent chapter (as of ch. 122) he looks down on a Indian guy in princeton (whose friendly to mc) for doing some calculation error laughs on him saying wasting his funding coming all the way to princeton. In some sense without system MC would be passing down flyers in streets while that Indian guy even with calculation error is genuinely genius doing his presentation in princeton using reverse mathematics which no one uses even author agreed upon.All in all I want is MC should have some sense in the way he treats the people around and not act as guy whot billions in lottery and become a complete douchebag.And for Author please do not make stereotypes of all westerners you know. By reading this novel I know you are patriotic and thats good for you but MC is not you and you didn't set any consistent worldback ground to MC have a biased view other than using same same on earth.My overall impression : 2.8/5. This doesn't mean I don't recommend reading it but take it with a grain of salt.
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I stopped at chapter 72 because with what little had happened it would make much more sense if I was on chapter 10-20. Seriously not a lot happens but every little thing gets a chapters worth of info dump to explain it. Some kid wants to steal something? Well, between "Hey, I have an idea." and the next sentence where he says "Lets steal a thing." there's literally a whole chapter padding things out. And what for? More context? A paragraph could've done that. A whole chapter is hardly called for... That's the basic formula of this story.Not to mention whatever content we get excluding the one theft subplot which was decently interesting revolves entirely around thoughts on his cultivation or info on his training. There's a slight feeling of progression but mostly you're left wondering why the story isn't focused on something more interesting. So as if it's not bad enough there's so many chapters of nothing, what we do get is barely passable as a story.The story just isn't that interesting.
Read all of it so far and i have got to say, clap clap, in my opinion the bleach moves are just way too good that it almost makes any story good instantly. Bankai? in a cultivation world, i've never been so thrilled so it happen. The novel uses anime characters as a replacement for some of the characters which makes it really is to imagine if you have seen the anime character before. the writing quality is pretty good compared to others, there is some broken sentences but anyone with half a brain should be able to understand the message trying to be told. Updates are every now and then, though i just started reading this recently so i am only going based off the dates the chapters was released. The story development is very good in my opinion, a lot of potential. i mean this is ATG + System/Bleach + multiple universes??? there is too much potential in my opinion. the original ATG i liked the first 230 chapters a lot however it slowly became very painful to keep reading it, really hope too see these arcs done in more of a correct and bad ass way compared to the original.Thanks for the chapters! As a fellow writer, take your time, excited to see how things go.
obviously I choose option 3 so I get a beautiful wife and a divine weapon, what more could I ask for?.....................................................
although i liked pocket hunting Dimension, but this is not good the settings are all messed up as if the author hadn't come out of his previous work because lots of settings are similar to PHD novel and a bit of a game setting too considering that items actually dropped from monster's while humans corpse remain which was a turn off for me.
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