CONSTRUCTED WIFE

What a interesting Lady.

"So what should I wear?"

Cheats: Unlimited pokeballs 99x every day

"Heh" Aster said "I never pictured you to be the morning person, Desmond"

I could use a little fuel myself

I need to get myself away from this place

This isn’t a bad story by any means. For me, the biggest gripe is the constant POV changes. I understand the author is using them for world-building and plot development, but because they happen so frequently—and often with characters who are nowhere near each other—it feels like you’re trying to read five different stories at once. There are definitely other issues with the book (as many reviewers have pointed out), but none are as frustrating as the relentless shifts in perspective.

For a beginner, this is pretty good! Although there are some jarring moments, a lot of it is pretty good! Keep it up! Please continue updating this novel of yours!Kinda reminds me of ROTMHS

bro, could you please make a manga on this novel ?? we all support you 💪🏻🗿💝