honest to God this will degrade your brain cells until there is no brain anymore if you're going to ask why just read to chapter 7 and you would get it I definitely can't keep reading for the ones who giving fake reviews shame on you
It is not a bad story, but it is a weak story.
It develops too quickly, besides that many things are a little pointless, a historian, apparently without training or one, becomes a specialist in fighting and things like that from one moment to the next.
It is a story to pass the time and for those who do not care about an empty reading and without depth.
This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over.
it has great potential but there are some things that are just stupid
why this novel is bad
1 abilities are op when they are just common example: an archer goblin has a skill that makes you invisible If you are still and not breathing I said why it is op in a paragraph comment when it got introduced(it basically is perfect for ambush hiding and confusing your enemy)
archer goblins have a skill called archers reinforcement or something it gives an enchantment to ALL weapons not only bows all weapons
a sage has a skill that shows every living being in 100 meters ( it hard counters assassin's with stealth making them useless and remember this is a common skill and there are like 5 more ranks)
2 the mc can hit small targets from a distance with a bow without missing when it's the first time that he uses one ( he doesn't have any skills that help with aiming or stats that help yet)
the same with a sword he became an expert with 1 hour of experience
I just can't man, has been a while since I read such an unabashed power trip, if it's what you set up to write author more power to ya, I'll just stop here, this LitRPG system makes no sense to me.
well its exactly how I rated it....good grammar and update stability but the rest is really bad...it looks like the author is not older than 14(max) ....to many discrepancies ...
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I'll continue to do better as you have said in the reviews. Thank you everyone, for reading my book.
It develops too quickly, besides that many things are a little pointless, a historian, apparently without training or one, becomes a specialist in fighting and things like that from one moment to the next.
It is a story to pass the time and for those who do not care about an empty reading and without depth.
The end.
why this novel is bad
1 abilities are op when they are just common example: an archer goblin has a skill that makes you invisible If you are still and not breathing I said why it is op in a paragraph comment when it got introduced(it basically is perfect for ambush hiding and confusing your enemy)
archer goblins have a skill called archers reinforcement or something it gives an enchantment to ALL weapons not only bows all weapons
a sage has a skill that shows every living being in 100 meters ( it hard counters assassin's with stealth making them useless and remember this is a common skill and there are like 5 more ranks)
2 the mc can hit small targets from a distance with a bow without missing when it's the first time that he uses one ( he doesn't have any skills that help with aiming or stats that help yet)
the same with a sword he became an expert with 1 hour of experience
3 I found an exploit