The idea is not bad at all. The biggest problem I have with this is writing quality (grammar and such, that's why I only put 3 stars for writing quality). Some sentences are completely incoherent. Author, you really need editor to check and fix your text (it seems you're not native English speaker).
I could help, but it's not my native language as well, so you'd better ask/look for someone anyway.
The idea is good, but the story has no realism at all. I advice those more than 14 years old not to read it as they risk being bored to death. Author should know the differences between a novel and a story for kids.
Yeah...the grammar is a little bad. Inconsistencies in using first person and third person are confusing. I just hope that your (author) future chapter more focus on trying to give a fighting chance to humanity, meaning developing weapon, technologies, martial art sect or magic academy not just MC trying to become strong alone. Even superman cannot be at two place at once. So built a fucking army.
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Some sentence have grammar mistake and wrong wording use. Still is is pretty readable
Having 2 types of power base : cultivators and magic is good as it make it easier for readers to remember them.
All in all, not too bad for a post apocalypse novel with time travel.
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I could help, but it's not my native language as well, so you'd better ask/look for someone anyway.
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Having 2 types of power base : cultivators and magic is good as it make it easier for readers to remember them.
All in all, not too bad for a post apocalypse novel with time travel.