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I really tried to give this story a chance but after struggling to read ten chapters I'll have to drop it. Yes the obvious bot reviews are bad (but that's just playing the game, I get it) but the author might need some classes about writing stories.The story is written sometimes like a Theatre play wright,(basic positioning of things and basic speech lines);then like a normal light novel with proper scenery description and conversations, character descriptions (angry, sad, shocked, etc,) edit: these parts feel like other Stories and their given similar scenes;and then everything is thrown out the window and it's a vomit of speech lines- "
Really like this story.. Characters are consistent, story is moving smoothly. Just a bit of Romance will be good (NO HAREM).Just wish author would publish 2 chap a day
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