Kinda weird to review your own since I'll definitely be biased towards it but anyway! This is my first work that I've published and I'll continue on publishing chapters daily and hopefully accomplish the dream to land a contract with Webnovel. This is a great story to read to pass the time and I hope you add this to your library.
A few bits written there is actually from my real experience with handling guns, close-combat fighting, farming, etc. I just enhanced it a bit to... well you know the reason why(I suck at it irl). XD
By the way, please drop a review so I could learn what you think and I appreciate you all for taking the time reading something from a complete beginner. Thanks!
Hello! Author here, I'm currently starting to edit the chapters beginning from that start for any typos, mis-gendering, and such. There have been many kind people to point out the mistakes so I could edit it but reading my own work from the start still revealed minor ones.
Anyway, there would be no changes to the story whatsoever from me doing this and this is just an update to tell everyone that I'm aware of the mistakes made and I 'm starting to correct them. However, if you still spot more, please do tell me and I will update them at the earliest.
Thanks for reading and see you next chapter ^_^
A comment for your thoughts or a review would really help me a lot!
Discord Server Link:
https://discord.gg/3JstDAV
My Discord:
Sky2316#9623
Hello! Author here again ^_^ Just a quick heads up, if you already saved them for offline reading, there are some bugs you might encounter. It was because I am still editing the chapters and the app would show the downloaded chapters first before the updated version.
The only way to fix it is to go to your settings and look for the Webnovel App. After that, clear the cache and data so the chapters that were saved would be removed and the updated ones will be shown. Sorry for the troubles but I'm trying to polish my book even more because I am still finding little errors here and there and I'm trying to improve readaility. Thanks again and I hope you continue to support me! ^_^
If you could have a zombie apocalypse with some realism, this fiction goes into detail.
There are the tiny errors in grammar, like using “on” when it should be “in.” If you tell the author, they will fix it, so it’s like it never existed.
The update is high, and with consistent quality.
The story revolves around base-building and character interactions. It works well with the vivid details.
That said, the characters aren’t the usual cardboard. The world keeps moving, even when the MC is doing something. He actually gets help and lets others do work because he is human, not the Godly know-it-all, despite his photographic memory. There are a few beauties popping up in his group, but it is forgivable, since they aren’t the usual annoying cast that want to hop on the MC, but can’t say it. They’re people.
The world is propped up with culinary tips, banter about gun handling, and so on. The depth is enough to be real without being a textbook.
It’s great. I don’t know why there aren’t as many Power Stones, gifts, and reviews as I expected. Maybe we all went broke or forgot?
Considering that this is the first work of the author as he said so himself, this is pretty good. The chapters are long and he could definitely chop them up to two or three chapters to gain more leeway in writing it, just saying. There were dark scenes as well hidden in there so watch out for it.
The story development has been great! Also the characters are relatable and hilarious. There is a lot of potentional and I can't wait to see the story the author has planned ahead for the MC.
Hey dude! I told you this would get popular if you uploaded it! XD I thought you would publish this is the other platform where we used to read it and it was actually here at WN made an account to support you here! Goodluck!
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A few bits written there is actually from my real experience with handling guns, close-combat fighting, farming, etc. I just enhanced it a bit to... well you know the reason why(I suck at it irl). XD
By the way, please drop a review so I could learn what you think and I appreciate you all for taking the time reading something from a complete beginner. Thanks!
Anyway, there would be no changes to the story whatsoever from me doing this and this is just an update to tell everyone that I'm aware of the mistakes made and I 'm starting to correct them. However, if you still spot more, please do tell me and I will update them at the earliest.
Thanks for reading and see you next chapter ^_^
A comment for your thoughts or a review would really help me a lot!
Discord Server Link:
https://discord.gg/3JstDAV
My Discord:
Sky2316#9623
The only way to fix it is to go to your settings and look for the Webnovel App. After that, clear the cache and data so the chapters that were saved would be removed and the updated ones will be shown. Sorry for the troubles but I'm trying to polish my book even more because I am still finding little errors here and there and I'm trying to improve readaility. Thanks again and I hope you continue to support me! ^_^
There are the tiny errors in grammar, like using “on” when it should be “in.” If you tell the author, they will fix it, so it’s like it never existed.
The update is high, and with consistent quality.
The story revolves around base-building and character interactions. It works well with the vivid details.
That said, the characters aren’t the usual cardboard. The world keeps moving, even when the MC is doing something. He actually gets help and lets others do work because he is human, not the Godly know-it-all, despite his photographic memory. There are a few beauties popping up in his group, but it is forgivable, since they aren’t the usual annoying cast that want to hop on the MC, but can’t say it. They’re people.
The world is propped up with culinary tips, banter about gun handling, and so on. The depth is enough to be real without being a textbook.
It’s great. I don’t know why there aren’t as many Power Stones, gifts, and reviews as I expected. Maybe we all went broke or forgot?