The group continued to play game after game, eventually getting to Laser Tag. Rebecca and Sophie were on one team, Harry and Jasper were on the other. The arena was dark, unlike the area they had just walked out of. Withing seconds of the huge "Go!" shots were being fired. Beams were blasting from players and traps all alike. Jasper was really good at laser tag as well, taking out lots of people and barely getting hit. Harry however, was better. He had taken an entire team on his own, half of which were probably afraid he would kill them if they put up a fight, the others thinking the opposite. Still, he had done it while taking only one hit. Then, from above, blasters from the yellow team, Rebecca's team, went off aimed square for them. Harry managed to find a barrier and Jasper followed him. That was when once again, the mood shifted.
I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.
The story has good start, seems to be a slightly innovative op character. The world building is good , hoping for more character development and some good side characters as the author seems to be hinting at from chapter 1.
well i hope its a good book since im the one who wrote it for those who are reading the book i hope you like it and if you have and recommendations please tell methere is a discord for the book in my bio i will be able to respond on comments there more often i will be uploading episodes when i have more of them built up to starting from today on thank you for reading my book
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