
Chrysalis
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Author:
RinoZ
- Status: Ongoing
Rating(3.8 / 5.0, 42 votes)
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There is some small mistakes such as grammar and other small things, but you won't really notice.
I'm not really sure about the stability of updates, but in the last few days, there has been a new chapter every day.
Although the beginning of the story was a little boring, it quickly became very interesting and exiting to read.
The story has chapters from another POV than the MC, and even though these are kinda boring to read at the beginning (because the MCs POV is always exiting and you get kinda pissed off when you have been wondering what would happen after the last cliffhanger, but then you get a non-MC chapter) they are probably important in the story as a whole, Rome wasn't built in one day.
We haven't really heard a lot about the world yet, but I think the author has planned something big.
Writing Quality - There is little repetition that I noticed, which is an unfortunately common affliction among many of the novels on this site. It is easy to read and understand without seeming underdeveloped or basic. This is what should be the baseline for all the novels on this site to reach.
Stability of Updates - I binged the whole story over the course of 2 days so I cannot comment on stability. I have seen a few apologies by the author for being late occasionally, but the overall reader reaction is positive in this regard.
Story Development - At the time of this review, there are 446 chapters released. The story is fine. Anthony, a newly reborn ant monster, is sent out into the massive Dungeon and he wants to uncover why he was summoned and who is Gandalf (the name he gives the System), all the while undergoing adventures and meeting new people and monsters, and sometimes eating them. It has good pacing with lots of room left for new interesting events to occur.
Character Design - The Protagonist is the weakest link in this story. Put frankly, he constantly acts in a manner which infuriated me and a number of other readers by making stupid choices that a normal person wouldn’t make. I believe this is deliberate on the author’s part as it happens a lot but always seems to work out in the main cast’s favor in the end. Some wasted potential comes in the form of the main character’s backstory as a human. In order to keep this review spoiler free I will refrain from talking about it directly, but every time it appears I feel disappointed.
The other characters are better and far more interesting, if a bit cliché. I wish more time would be spent on them, but I also know that a similar web novel Kumo Desu Ga, Nani Ka? does just that and I can understand if the author wishes to be distinct from it.
World Background - The world building is where this story shines. At the start of many chapters, the author will give a snippet from some in-universe books which gives the reader some insight into the world of Pangera and those who live in it. The setting feels more lived in and real than most other #system novels that I have read and the protagonist is less of a prophesied hero and more like just another person in this world. Very Good.
Overall - if you are interested in something to pass the time in an enjoyable manner without having to pay ridiculous premium costs, then I can recommend this novel wholeheartedly.
Finally, 8 legs are better than 6.
Fight me.
i hope this won't count as a spoiler but the whole story is written as a monologue (granted there are some bits which aren't) and the self depricating humor of the protagonist is spot on.
Swing, swing, swing with me
Raise your mandibles and raise your voice!
Sing, sing, sing with me
Down and down into the deep
Who knows what we'll find beneath?
Biomass, rubies, gold and more
Hidden in the mountain store
Born underground, suckled from a teat of stone
Raised in the dark, the safety of our mountain home
Skin made of Diamond, mana in our bones
To dig and dig makes us free
Come on brothers sing with me!
I am a Ant and I'm digging a hole
Diggy diggy hole, diggy diggy hole
I am a Ant and I'm digging a hole
Diggy diggy hole, digging a hole
The sunlight will not reach this low
Deep, deep in the Dungeon
Never seen the blue moon glow
Ants won't fly so high
Fill your Facehands and down some Biomass!
Stuff your bellies at the feast!
Stumble home and fall asleep
Dreaming in our mountain keep
Born underground, grown inside a rocky womb
The earth is our cradle; the mountain shall become our tomb
Face us on the battlefield; you will meet your doom
We do not fear what lies beneath
We can never dig too deep
I am a Ant and I'm digging a hole
Diggy diggy hole, diggy diggy hole
I am a Ant and I'm digging a hole
Diggy diggy hole, digging a hole
I am a Ant and I'm digging a hole
Diggy diggy hole, diggy diggy hole
I am a Ant and I'm digging a hole
Diggy diggy hole, digging a hole
Born underground, suckled from a teat of stone
Raised in the dark, the safety of our mountain home
Skin made of Diamonds, mana in our bones
To dig and dig makes us free
Come on brothers sing with me!
I am a Ant and I'm digging a hole
Diggy diggy hole, diggy diggy hole
I am a Ant and I'm digging a hole
Diggy diggy hole, digging a hole
I think Anthony would find a great friend in some Dwarfs ;-)
Great writing, Updates are coming regulary too.
Character Design is great and the World Background gets trinkeld in every now and then.
A solid 4.4~5 stars
I see all the reviews about; "don't take it seriously or you won't have fun!" but when the actual story itself brings the reader out of that mindless popcorn fest with its own disregard for even a basic standard of bookkeeping it goes a little beyond the pale.
see, I have no issue 'turning off my brain' if that's the kind of novel it wants to be, but it needs to be very careful with its own internal bookkeeping, so I don't actually have to be worried about it myself. that's the state of play a story like that has to bring to the table.
it has to be consistent, and, ultimately, it has to be largely funny and fun. I, personally, think the story fails to do so, and it's all the worse because of the rest of the issues that fall by the wayside as a result or because of this idea that one doesn't need to care about the rest making sense or working so long as one or two things is done serviceably.
but what do I know, right? 1800+ ratings and a 4.54/5 overall at this moment, it's gotta have something to it, right? maybe you'll see something I didn't, maybe it's just not to my taste, maybe I should ask myself why I pushed so hard to like this story? I read more chapters than I would normally do...
Ok. That right there is so bad. Thats gotta be the worst pun I've ever fucking seen out of all the novels ive seen on this site, and I fucking love it.
The writing contains western slang and internet meme references throughout, which for myself is a major plus and quite humorous, but can be offputting to some.
The narrative moves forward at a slow trot, and does justice to the whole "reincarnated as a monster" genre. This is no "re:monster", instead it is more of "tensei ****ara slime datta ken" with the humor and the protagonist embracing his un-humanoid monster form.
To the author: I spent an entire afternoon binge reading this. Well done. *slow clap*
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