G'day mates! A new novel by Choas, so you know it will be good! Writing Quality: There have been very few errors in the currently released chapters. 4.9/5Stability of Updates: Tbd.Story Development: Seems interesting so far, and Choas's past stories have had interesting plots, so I'm looking forward to seeing how this one develops.Character Design: Just in the first few chapters, several interesting people have been introduced. Fey best girl?World Background: It seems to be a science/magic mixed world with monsters roaming the wilds, I hope to read more of Dax's adventures!
Why do I feel like I have read almost similar synopsis in some other novel too?Please confirm my guess! P.S. I have yet to read this, so 4 star(benefit of doubt).
It seems this is nationalism. I will just leave this here. It seems this is nationalism. I will just leave this here. It seems this is nationalism. I will just leave this here. It seems this is nationalism. I will just leave this here.
A story that I Promise you won't regret reading if you read 80 chapters (Free) and most probably you will fall in love with it.Important: STORY: The story is about a person who dies in the game and gets a system that brought him back in time.The system isn't simple though and it gives Ryder missions that force him to do the stuff that he don't want to save his life, but there is a reason for all that. You would get to know about that if you atleast read the free chapters of the story.It's not a story about a slave to the system but about something that goes way back than this life and world. The system does all this for Ryder in a sense.The MC will be an OP MC which would be way amazing when you get to understand the inkling of the true mystery (Chapter 79 or somewhere around that).CHARACTERS: The Important Characters are all given a personality of their own which most will love.There are gods, Hobbits, Elves, cultivators, and everything one could ask for which starts to make sense from chapter 70 onwards where the seriousness of the story really gets a grip.Non Important Characters are intentionally made to overreact in certain situations which is supposed to be stupid and added in the story to give it a lighter touch. You would enjoy it if you don't think to much about that, as that's made to be like that, but that don't affect the seriousness of the story in any way.Writing Quality: There might be a few grammer mistakes but nothing major that will affect reading experience.Stability of updates: The story updates daily with mass release occasionally. It won't be dropped either like all of my stories.World Background: The world is much more extensive than the simple Real world and the game world which I hope most will like. Read more to know more.For more info: Read chapter 0
Writing a review is the hardest part for me.I would rather do scripting than do a review here. Nonetheless, for my book.Hey, I don't know who started this culture here in Web Novel. But, it's becoming quite trending here. Almost everyone did it as some kind of necessity to write their review. I don't like it, though.So this is my first and last shameless review of the book.Well well, I'll try my hardest to entertain my readers who entail for this book.Alright, give it a try and delve into this fabulous surrealism world of the_handsome_fatty or just Joey.
At the start, I felt like there is a mentor kind of relationship with Hades and la puppeteer! If you could pull it off, this would be epic! Although there are few grammatical writings from here and there, one sweep of editting will make the entire novel at its finest! Kudos for the author!
This was my first webnovel read and it was sooooo cute! I loved the quirks of all the characters, and how Secretary Andrew and Allen got to slowly know each other. The fact that you showed how different life can be for people of different classes was something I was surprised about. I hope you continue writing and continue improving!
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