chrono-wars: legacy of past

They say you’re your own worst critic, so don’t let the authors self review fool you into not reading this. The book is amazing! It’s had me punching the air in glee as Varían (the MC) overcomes challenges and his power growth and struggles feel believable. His interactions with others are funny and engaging, this book isn’t perfect but it’s absolutely deserving of a high review.

This novel is a grammatical abomination...................................................................................................................................................

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This novel is good but there are a lot of mistakes in the characters Silas eyes are supposed to be green but they changed to golden brown also Margaret's eyes changed from gray to blue same thing with the hair colors of some characters also Laila's elemental convergence at first it was wind then it became earth then the author said it was earth and wind and in the virtual reality fight she was attacking other students using earth and water there are problems in describing events and abilities what is supposed to mean golden lightning with black fog or in the Physical Assessment when MC's lightning changed from golden to blue then it was described as golden with blue inside it this is a mess in the description does the author use AI in writing the novel I don't want to sound like someone who focuses on the negative side. The author is new and is supposed to accept criticism. This will help him improve and make the novel more enjoyable. I would like to say that the novel is good, but I hope that the author corrects the mistakes in the future.