(quick side note, updating stability shouldn't be an option for the review because I just found the story and I have absolutely no if it's good so I just put a 5 star since I like the story)ANYWAYS, I love this novel.the only 4 star rating I'll give is on the writing quality because there are spelling/grammar errors even up to the current chapters (340+ish). this, however, isn't a big deal because it's a good story.the mc isn't super op, making sure there's a bit of suspense and drama in each situation. Though, the author does go a bit too overboard with the giant battles.The mc isn't not all-powerful, he shouldn't solo a thousand man battle the way he does with his current skills. 400+ kill count (demon of crestfall plain arc) just seems like a lot, though it's easier to swallow at such a low level in the story line.I almost stopped before even getting started when I read a review where someone said the fairy ruins the story but she actually made things more interesting. I'm not a fan that the mc received such an OP gift but it at least makes a bit if sense as opposed to other versions of the same trope.Even up to the latest chapter I enjoy the story which is hard since even on the 2000 plus chapter novels I can barely get through 10% of them without feeling either disgusted or bored.The mc may have some OP skills but he's not overly reliant on them and the author does end up nerfing them a bit throughout the story, but a bit of OP is acceptable in these types of stories.Please continue with the novel Author, maybe let him have a bit of romance so he doesn't turn incel later on? Would be a nice change of pace!JackxPeniel otp!
So far loving the novel, just wish it would be a harem. And author stop describing boobs and jiggling butts if you are not giving us a lemon scene also if it's harem let the class rep be part of the harem
Chapters r too short. Had it been written by Mrdojo(writer of the original webnovels 'The 7 Realms' and 'The Necromancer system') this novel would have been finished within 80-85 chapters.Also the grammar isn't that appealing. And for those ppl who keep saying - 'Thos novel is trash. I dropped it after 3/4 chapters.' well, that's your fault. Most novels start their stories after a few chapters. This is one of them. It's not the best novel but certainly not the worst either (if we not bother too much abt grammar which is the problem with most webnovels on this site😂)Lastly, this is more of a 'narration' type novel. They tend to forecast future happenings(which r already obvious to readers. Such as - MC will become a powerhouse. Or as, he will marry a beauty).
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Loving it so far, the main character is hilariously dark. Not a lot of world building in the firat two chapters, but what is there is structurally sounds and pulls the story along.There are some grammar/writing errors. It’s not enough to distract from the story and is easily fixed with a quick edit later.I’m waiting for him to pick back up his canabalistic ways.
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