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I keep wishing for a good blacksmithing novel, unfortunately this is not it. Never thought it was possible, but it may actually be worse than Forging The Path To Godliness. It's just plain bad, ******* writing that seems like it was written by a child. Predictable and cliched. Seems like something you would expect to find in RoyalRoad, in fact there are definitely better stories there. Absolutely not worth translating at all, so I suppose it's only a matter of time before this gets picked as Editors Choice over much, much better novels like "I just won't play by the book" and "My Debauched Devotion". After seeing Forging the Path To Godliness get chosen over "I Can See The Lines Of Fortune, it's really obvious that the readers opinion and reviews don't matter at all, and the "editor" who chooses the novels is a brainless moron.
Love the premise, hate the execution. The author uses the MC marrying a fox demon as little more than an excuse for the super natural organization to pay attention to him. No lovey dovey newlywed antics. No heartfelt "I know your a Demon fox, but I love you anyways" confession. Not even an explanation for why he can see her tails poking out of the bottom of her dress at the wedding, but nothing about them when they sleep together. There is almost zero world building at all. This is a modern world where spiritual energy is awakening causing creatures to transform. That's it. The MC and his wife are apparently well of but nothing about what there jobs are. Only off hand mentions of the MC having just finished a big project and a casual "Oh, by the way" revelation that his wife works at a kindergarten in chapter 20 when she tells him he needs to drop her off early today for the field trip.I really love the idea behind this book, but it needs more focus on the relationship between the MC and his wife to make the readers care about them. The jealous superior at the supernatural organization, who everyone knows is just a two-bit side character villain, gets more screen time than his beloved wife. I really hope it gets better in the future and the author is just trying to draw it out so that the relationship doesn't feel rushed or forced but right now if feels almost non-existent.
Really great novel. it's hard to come by this type work. Author you should keep writing. I wish web novel promote new authors a little. But, I believe readers will find it and move it upwards. To Author: please post at least 1 chapter a week or people will think it's inactive.
Great novel. Wordind is your biggest problem a simple editting program will fix most of it. Read till chapter 4 but the wording was stopping me from enjoying the flow of the book having to correct words in my head.
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