I really like this novel and there is almost no flaw in it that I can point out except for one which is Ling Chen's age and maturity.I get Ling Chen has been living a harsh life ousted by the world as some sort of demon / fiend god which would probably mature a kid past their age. But Ling Chen is 10 years old yet he acts like someone maybe in their 20s or 30s to the point of it becoming ridiculous now.Now Ling Chen also has a kid that was birthed from the Black Lightning fruit (correct me if i'm wrong) and now he, a 10 year old, is now taking care of a new born. Ling Chen had stated himself on how difficult it would be to raise the baby as he was practically a baby himself, but he really needs to act his age more. He's 10 for god sake. I just wish the author made Ling Chen 20 before Ling Lei was born or something...In conclusion, Ling Chen acts way older than he actually is. Which I find annoying. My rating is still a 4.5 but point really bugs me...
Im enjoying this book, its really great. there is stuff here and there that needs fixed, but overall the book is really nice progression vibe to it. I enjoy the video game world its in, the details of story etc. The conversations between chars needs to have a better devide, so it won't be that confusing to other people trying to read. also its nice to know what other ppl are thinking but at the same time its not that clear from paragraph to paragraph who is thinking what til your already read it, if that makes sense. but overall I love this book and want it to pass so I can read more of it.
The story is intriguing and the world background is well designed. The story development is smooth. I hope to read many more chapters in the future. Happy writing!
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For a beast novel, this one is really good, much better than most of them. But it reminds me of KR novels. Is it a KR novel? heh.Overall nothing super amazing but those who like taming beasts novels will probably like this one.
This is even better than Supreme Harem God System! The world building is amazing in combination with Shgs and I love that the protagonist isn’t from earth. Makes the story feel more authentic. The Azriel Origin Arc was great.
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