So, while the story is mostly enjoyable, I have been having trouble with the mindset of the MC. he was raised as an assassin. From 3 years old. While I don't know what a child assassin mindset would be like...I would assume he was trained to be patient, listen, be aware, take in information before acting, and would generally be colder and more indifferent to people. Unfortunately, while he has his moments of brilliance in planning and fighting, his overall attitude, intelligence, social perception, and thoughtfulness are equivalent to some of the worst Japanese isekai protagonist s I have ever read. In other words...he's dumber than a baked potato. Then there are the side characters...everyone has this laissez faire, forgetful attitude that makes it near impossible to treat all but a few of the characters with any sort of seriousness...no matter their importance or power level. That, and the translation quality make me rate this book lower than it could be.
Kid who was kidnapped at 3 years old, held in terrorist organization hideout and trained brutally for 6 years. Being beaten, forced to train, being brainwashed to be a mindless killer, being thrown into a room with all other kids and told 'last one to survive is free to go' and ends up being the last man standing. After all of this, SWAT raids the hideout and he gets rescued, not only does he have NO trauma, he acts like a grownup while talking with others, he trusts some random man to adopt him, agrees, goes home with the man and after 2 weeks of being there he GETS A FRIEND who is his age. How would a kid with past like that be able to trust anyone, not to mention make a friend? And to top it off, the 'friend' who is martal arts genius, who trained a lot, but only sparred, never had to fight for his life, somehow manages to fight the MC to a tie in a duel? The character design is very, very bad. His background is a massive plothole. No idea why the author would introduce a background like that, only to make the MC 'normal'.
Shin is in a word a absolute OP mc and should meet Arthur in game to rival him and maybe take him down a notch. Oh and monkey ill review ur chaps and write wat u should fix if u want me to if ur still looking for one. Overall really good story and keep it up dude.
When I saw this novel for the first time I thought, 'this will be an interesting read', and is was, but the English was so terrible that I had to drop the story.
This book has many typos, the author has no idea of the concept of past tense, or grammar in general.
I had to correct every sentence in my mind just to make this novel a readable one.... Although I haven't read much, this book could have been an excellent one, a shame the author doesn't know how to write.
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This book has many typos, the author has no idea of the concept of past tense, or grammar in general.
I had to correct every sentence in my mind just to make this novel a readable one.... Although I haven't read much, this book could have been an excellent one, a shame the author doesn't know how to write.
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