Okay, the updates in order make no sense. You went back and edited your story and it caused the chapters to go from talking to a teacher to fighting moonlight with a summon that we never read about.
Its medicore.
Mc iritate me so much ...
Autor make him look weak. And he was.. but all the time he lose battle and when he was about to die his hiden power destroy enemy....
And his charakter...
He was bullied and when he got magic he new guy he forget past and accept everything like normal magic ok new guys ok mehhh....
He complett another person..
while slow it is by far one of the best chat group stories i have read love your work keep it up :) only thing i could hope for is a faster realease but as a writer myself understand both how hard and potentialy unhealthy that is but none the less love you work :)
Nice writing quality
Good update
Good story development
Good character design
Nice world background !..........................................................................................!
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Mc iritate me so much ...
Autor make him look weak. And he was.. but all the time he lose battle and when he was about to die his hiden power destroy enemy....
And his charakter...
He was bullied and when he got magic he new guy he forget past and accept everything like normal magic ok new guys ok mehhh....
He complett another person..
Good update
Good story development
Good character design
Nice world background !..........................................................................................!
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