CHAOS DEMON EVOLUTION SYSTEM

Ok so far but the grammar is horrible. Not for people who hate bad grammar

the spelling and overall grammar is horrifying but I like the story development, this story has a lot of potential however it is the simple spelling that is ruining it

Hmm, la novela es buena, pero cuando un sistema de mierda te amenaza con matarte si no cumples su misiones, non importa si es beneficioso o no para el mc, se siente muy mal

nice story but hard to follow the flow, jumps from character to character, no explenation on how the story went from point A to point B and suddenly going to point F with no explenation.
hoped for better flow After going Premium but It remain the same. I regret spending coins for this quality

it's a ok story cause the internet is filled with same kinda stories which are plotted batter so yeah a three star story but very slow progressing

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it's good but it still needs a lot of work. space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space.