I am so impressed with this work! Honestly speaking I like everything about the story. Slow development, characters, mystery. But most of all, how feelings are described. How innocent love became a passion. The author's vocabulary is so rich! It seems like the writer is at the scene, in the room listening to heartbeats, feeling the touches, and moves, and observing the love game. I am looking forward to read the whole story from beginning to the end. Thanks for the pleasure of reading.
Man author knows how to entice a fujoshi like myself into reading another chapter, and one more and one more and another----the only thing the author did wrong was not updating more. I NEED MORE! First chapter was intense, and when i said intense i meant it--- I was hooked with Hiro and Jin, and it was just the first chapter! Would love to see more---so come on chop chop updateeee!
author your book is so nice but you need to update more often because you are getting many many more reads you need to update more often because I love you smoke so much and I cannot wait two to three weeks for you to just upload one chapter I have school
be patient, everyone. this story has thousands of chapters and it's still ongoing. im at the part where Samuel travels back in time travels back to his 14 year old self, but with the strength of a divine martial artist. it gets much more interesting.
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Man author knows how to entice a fujoshi like myself into reading another chapter, and one more and one more and another----the only thing the author did wrong was not updating more. I NEED MORE! First chapter was intense, and when i said intense i meant it--- I was hooked with Hiro and Jin, and it was just the first chapter! Would love to see more---so come on chop chop updateeee!