Among the best realistic scifi ive ever read, how the story moves, the filler (fluff-potential) chapters with the female lead, the scientific and technological details, the world itself, wow just amazing...really recommended thank you author for bringing this piece of literature to life.
I personally enjoy the plot development and the characters (the second FL needs more screentime, please)...and what suprised me was the factual details the author included, for example, bullets calibre, military base facilities, science behind a abilities, etc...
Continue with this pacing of your hard work mr author, i wish the best for you and this work of yours...♥️♥️♥️
First of all, good job so far sir author. I hope you can keep up with this momentum, and i wish you all the best.
Secondly, I truly enjoy rewding the story so far, the MC is quite immature sometimes which add to his character flavor. And the fact that the author inserts the MC's monologue while he maintain a calm facade conversing with others is hilarious. Anyway, initially I won't comment much about the item names but reading the title for this particular chapter is funny as heck. Good job
I know it's the limit of writing, but the author should try to use less of the character status screen written into the plot. I think it's quite disruptive to the reading experience. My idea is that put another section at the bottom of the chapter after story is written. And if need to mention it in the story, just write the important information. Good luck to you, mr. author, i really enjoyed the premise and the plot so far... [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story-telling, amazing scifi plot, really recommended for readers who enjoy the genre. the author also was really dedicated to uploading frequently and constantly, thumbs-up from me...
Amazing storytelling, attention to details is impeccable as well, but i do hope the author could pace the character's dialogues a bit to make it sound more natural. the rest of the writing is good as always...keep up the great work, hoping to read quality scifi from you
Wow i'm actually amazed by the storytelling technique the writer used in chapter 9, two povs on the same scene, one from the a soldier, the other from a gamer...nice touch, and a job well done
The writer seemed to have put a lot of thought in worldbuilding, as well as how to implement them into the writing. there are many small details that explained the world while the story is moving on, without over-saturating the plot with narration, which in my personal opinion is the correct way to explain the world...though i'll admit that the writing is not perfect, it still able to draw in the readers' attention to the plot
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Continue with this pacing of your hard work mr author, i wish the best for you and this work of yours...♥️♥️♥️
Secondly, I truly enjoy rewding the story so far, the MC is quite immature sometimes which add to his character flavor. And the fact that the author inserts the MC's monologue while he maintain a calm facade conversing with others is hilarious. Anyway, initially I won't comment much about the item names but reading the title for this particular chapter is funny as heck. Good job