kinda felt bad abt Xu Yang, a nice guy outstanding and good looking and all. But he was beaten by a freaking cheat system user who was originally a loser with good looks.
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I really don't like novels were the MC breaks the entire world's system in the first chapters. Why even spent time establishing a world, not that copying pokemon is great, but still, why spent the time only to shatter everything to make the MC look OP?There are no twists, no suspense and no immersion. This is literally a stomp festival in written form.Might be fun as a fanfiction for pokemon, but as a stand alone work? Just terrible.
Thank you everybody for your support because we've currently reached a total of 23K viewers and it's continually increasing. I'll admit, when I first started posting this. I wasn't sure I could deal with it because I don't have much free time even during the holidays so if you see some chapters which I haven't changed certain words, that's because I don't have the time to do so. Nevertheless, though this novel is not for the faint of heart. It's still quite good right. 😂
We got out of the car and approached the police tape. The police officer in front were mythical's. Two beast men. One Avian and one Dog person. As soon we approached they glanced at our badges and lifted the tape for us to enter.
"But I'm older than her." The tiny boy with his soft pink sweater said indifferently. The lady was shock to what Cole said as she stared the kid from head to toe.
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