Garbage, i know we all use this word alot around here but my god i can't find any other word to describw this thing.The first 60-70 chapters were pretty fun to read and i though this would be the next system novel to pop off but then it was as if the author didn't want to write a system novel anymore and instead started a generic plot line about immortality, dude, i came to read a system novel, if i wanted to read a adventure novel i would just go re-read legend of the great sage.The mc is the plainest thing ever, no desires, no motivatoon, no real thoughts, he just reacts to whatever happens in front of him, the side-characters? what side-characters? completely forgettable.
Pretty good so far especially that thingy with that banana creative 🙂 idk what to say anymore gotta have more than 140 characters essay time Cow hamari maata hai, uske 2 horns hote hai, vo milk dete hai, char per hote hai
Good job author, you improved chap after another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good workalso guys u must read it because this author is very disciplined and always delivers
What you have so far is good! The plot is interesting. Love the way you started off with your story.There's a few punctuation mistakes and grammatical errors but your story is still understandable. Keep up the good work!
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