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This novel top tier I tell yah. To tier!!!!Also I'm doing this review because I'm a slave to this exp to a point where I want to start a cult.Who wants to join?

The moment you read a group of 8-year-old kids running an underground organization inside a wizard school with house goblins and an 8-or-9-year-old girl poisoning her boyfriend, who was also 8 or 9 and had probably fcked with, because of a gambling debt, you know you can't take this novel seriously anymore. Be it the characters, the story or the world, they are... colorful, but they are only at that, nothing more, nothing less. The author made it too convenient for the main character. "Sh*t, I'm a serious danger here which can cost me my life. What, I leveled up and conveniently acquired this ultra awesome skill which can conveniently save my life and was forgotten by me? Great!" World background is also nonsensical. Have you seen any gods schemed to kill a mortal before? Have you?!And wow, this novel really knows no boundary of child abusal. Rape, beating, killing,... it has them all. And the main character has also taken part in the beating, and killing part. Well, the fact that he is only 14 makes you "meh".You know what is wrong about this novel except redundant child abusal cases? There are no kids! Wow! Isn't that great?!Not!!For the love of Talos, it's annoying to see every kids act like a college student or ***** and sometimes the adults act like kids!

interesting plot which is differently unique which I respect. The wording is lengenthy  and this goes to its advantage as it explores the nature of corruption and this prison

Me encantó la trama excelente!!!🥰😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The novel is basically a direct copy of Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top. The setting and plot was copied, commiting copyright infringement. It is a lower quality version of it too. Chapters (at least time of reading) were not edited that great (baddish grammar). With chapters being pretty short too, and so far it is just (essentially sameish) developmemt skipping the details in the original, I gave up on continuing reading. I like that some1 is contuing the saga os Elawn, but u need to at least make it fan fic or change a lotbof stuff, case u r stealing property and can get in a lot of trouble. Don't sign a contract either if stuff isnt changed, since I wouldnt be surprised if they take huge advantage down the road like debt+fines, at least credit the novel btw..

It is interesting so far.Though it was about VR games but lt about being a gamer in real life. With just the option to increase his  status.

I applaud the author for the way he has written this. It grabbed and dragged me (kicking and screaming) to the next chapter. Please continue!

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