what's wrong with novels these days or is it just chinese authors that write dumb novels.MC just doesn't makes sense. Possessiveness over a girl doesn't make sense.Sports car idea doesn't make sense, he never thought about the fact that people will see.Shouting in the classroom just because he can understand math.The fact is that MC is unrelatable. Even the worst students know something but he seems like a totally illiterate person.Even the trend is now moving towards intelligent and somewhat relatable MC's.
Reincarnation, cultivation, adventure... all are my favourite tags! Also, the first few chapters looked very promising and I didn't find any error. Hope to read more. Good luck, author!
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I gave full marks to the story, but I am dropping at the 3rd Arc due my personal preferences. The writing quality is very good with minimal mistakes that are few and far between. Author keeps the reader in the dark about the story so as things happen they are fresh and satisfying. The things that got me turned off enough to stop are things most readers are happy with. 1. The constant line " I have to get stronger" is rammed down the readers throat sometimes multiple times over these small chapters.2. The plot of him hiding his strength while trying to play both a strong character and the weak character around the same characters is one thing I myself have trouble reading for a prolonged time. For me there comes a point the drama to do so is an annoyance and it loses its appeal. Again most readers like this and accept it whole heartedly.3. Because of his dual personality as weak and strong it makes most of the story just himself so it turns into inner monologue after inner monologue. Sometimes you get whole chapters that are an inner monologue. The monologues are well written and do add some to the story, but for me they are just too frequent. I didn't get far enough to see if or when Rey has a character growth as we are still only a couple months into the story.Overall very good story, just a few thing that affect me more than most, but keep up the good work.
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