Broken Inside

This one has potential! Although it's a bit slow at the beginning, the story totally flips after the revelation. It's a novel worth reading.

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I like these kinds of novels since I m a huge fan of murder/mystery/horror novels and I believe that the author has similar taste in novels! This is one of those which I needed. Thank you author :)

The plot of the story is quite interesting, so was the first and second chapter. The way the author describes the scenes is pretty good too. I am curious to see what will happen next to the protagonist and how this story will become a murder mystery story. Although it would be better if the chapters were updated more often. Keep up the good work author! :)

THIS? this right here has me hooked!!