Story sound awesome. But in my opinion, too many wish is not good. All the mc need is high intelligence. being smart enough too build his own AI. building a farm where no one could touch like a valley surrounded by the radiation watsteland and probably monster. mc is smart enough to build a teleporter allowing access to him and anyone he allow. removing two wish and making it fit more into the world. i don’t really like how something unnatural is pushed into the world. A supernatural power that can’t be explain squezed into a sci story.
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