G'day friends! Here's a 5 section review for Flare's novel!Writing quality: Great writing. The grammar is good, and there aren't any spelling errors.Stability of updates: Batch released chapters as opposed to daily updates, which works for me!Story development: The story is developing slowly and with a lot of slice-of-life. The attention to detail is great, but the pacing is a lot slower than in most novels. Great for a slower read, but the excitement is a bit more spread out.Character design: The characters seem interesting, and have a lot of detail behind them. That said, a lot of characters are introduced very fast, (in the intro chapter) to the point that it is difficult to even tell which side they are fighting for. I'm sure that we will get to know the characters over time, but having so many new characters being named all at once was a bit confusing.World background: Has a lot of detail, and based off the end of the intro, there will probably be quite a lot of interesting stuff set up in the future!
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