But what she said shocked everyone present at the dining hall. No one would have thought that this handsome young man was none other that the adopted brother of the current family head.
"Hmmph.... Filthy coward. Well time for me to get to the Phoenix Trial and get myself the Phoenix Bloodline." said Mesa to himself as walked towards the Ten Thousand Beast Mountain Range.
"Izuku-kun! Over here!" Izuku ran over to Ochaco and accidentally tripped and knocked into one of the gangsters. One of them said "Who the hell are you? Watch where your going! What? You want a beating?" Ochaco came over "Are you okay Izuku-kun!?" Ochaco helped him up "y-yeah, I'm okay" He looked up to the gangster "Your a middle school kid, right? Get the fuck outta here before the rest of my crew get here. I've given you a chance to run. Take it. Your lucky, I won't give you a chance next time"
After finishing reading the current up to date chapters of the novel, I decided to do a review for this. To put it simply, so far, the content is quite exceptional for an original novel and deserves praise. To the author, I would like to say, keep it up, I enjoy this very much for it's quality.To explain in more detail, there are several points of highlights. Firstly, I feel that the sense of character and personality of the MC and even side characters are well thought out and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status. The characters are brought to life quite skillfully and their emotions are also quite well portrayed. For the second point, although there aren't many chapters so far and is only generally one chapter per day, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more without giving the sense of boredom mid-chapter and skim through them instead. The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace. The details are well outlined without beying overly embellished. As for the chapter updates, the speed is quite fine as long as the quality of the content could be maintained or improved.
Man, your story is incredible, spectacular. There's nothing to complain about. There are very few novels out there that feature Russia as the main country. I just hope you don't stop writing. If you keep going like this, I guarantee your story will be very well-rated.
The story is beautifully written and your characters descriptions are unique, it was a great read and i hope to see more chaps, this book deserves the five star. Kudos to the author.
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