A lady jumped when a "Boom!" it surprised him and he almost thought that the murderous look was against him but ... He saw how a young hero in a green suit received her.
The story crafts a vivid and immersive fantasy world, showing great promise despite some unpolished areas. For a newcomer, it's an impressive effort, especially in how the author clarifies early confusion, making the narrative more engaging. This attention to clarity strengthens the storytelling, keeping the reader invested in both the plot and characters. With further refinement, the author’s style could become truly exceptional.
Astig ang kwento. Punong-puno ng mystery, twists, at matinding emosyon. Si Kaesu, dating inosente, natutong lumaban sa mundong puno ng panlilinlang. Kada eksena, may kaba at tanong kung sino ang totoo niyang kakampi. Medyo mabilis lang ang ilang pangyayari, at may characters na sana mas nabigyan ng depth. Pero overall, solid at sulit basahin, lalo na kung mahilig ka sa mystery at action!
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