it's confusing from the start I don't know what I am reading why does the mc know things he never heard of before I'm confused at least give explanation in the end like it's unique. but gives up understanding for the new readers I feel like I'm hearing words nót sentences but words
Writing this review after finishing the first volume (100 chapters).
Positives:
- Dark and gritty, with a mature writing style
- Unpredictable - things don't always go the MC's way, or the way you're expecting
- Refreshing - in a very oversaturated "system" genre, the author manages something very different
- There is a decent balance of significant plot events and slice of life sections
- The world grows with the MC, there aren't any overwhelming knowledge dumps
- I personally enjoy the insight in the authors comments, demonstrating their thoughts, opinions and growth as an author
Negatives:
- Can be confusing at times
- As a weak MC, he spends a distressing amount of time injured
- MC seems to lack any motivation outside of staying alive so far, spending most of his time following the whims of those stronger than him - hoping this will change at some point
Looks fun to read. It's nice to see an actual fantasy setting instead of another isekai novel. Keep up the good work, hopefully your novel will get really popular!
well the author put a note but yea its not a story i could get into personally but ik alot of people might like it so ill leave this reveiw here as a thank you for the note
This is one of the best character development stories I've read on this platform. Most of the adventure stories have OP characters. This character constantly has to fight his own flaws, a story about growth in the face of failure and prejudice.
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Positives:
- Dark and gritty, with a mature writing style
- Unpredictable - things don't always go the MC's way, or the way you're expecting
- Refreshing - in a very oversaturated "system" genre, the author manages something very different
- There is a decent balance of significant plot events and slice of life sections
- The world grows with the MC, there aren't any overwhelming knowledge dumps
- I personally enjoy the insight in the authors comments, demonstrating their thoughts, opinions and growth as an author
Negatives:
- Can be confusing at times
- As a weak MC, he spends a distressing amount of time injured
- MC seems to lack any motivation outside of staying alive so far, spending most of his time following the whims of those stronger than him - hoping this will change at some point
Well written, fun story