This novel is really good, it's sheer quality makes me want even faster updates, anyways here's my review.Writing Quality - ★★★★★ I've read many novels here on the platform although I'm pretty new I can defintely say that your novels are one of the best in this platform, the quality of this novel in writing is amazing.Story Development - ★★★★★The development of your novel in my opinion is great, not too slow and not too fast. The MC isn't the strongest/OP right away but he gradually develops although not too slow which I like.Character Design - ★★★★★ Although the story hasn't finished exploring all the mysteries of the MC and his college life I can safely say that everything is consistent and good from the emotions shown to the mysteries that are yet to be revealed.Updating Stability - ★★★★Although the updates are fast, consistent and contain quality they are not the fastest on the platform. But don't take me wrong, the updates are consistent and have quality which matters over quantity.World Background - ★★★★VR game backgrounds are all alike/similar to each other but I frankly love what you did with the story, especially the mystery about the MC's life and who he really is, I'm looking forward to when that'll be revealed.
This book is absolutely amazing it's well-thought-out and it honestly intrigues me about his past and what his present and future would be like from now on oh and does he have kids.I think this book can go a long way and that is very worthy of being published and I only read a dozen chapters starting to have the urge to binge and I'm going to end up being caught up with the releases and but then I'm going to be like noooooooo~
The main thing that you should note about this novel is that the main character is an idiot, not only is he an idiot but he gets progressively dumber as the novel goes on. Now don’t get me wrong I like this novel quite a bit, I’ll always enjoy a good dungeon society/ skill stealing story but the main character is what one would call a battle junky with a bad habit of practically announcing that he has cheat like abilities to everyone and their grandmother.I’d give the world and overall story 5/5But character design / development is a -3/5 for me.
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I love the progression of the story. Yes, it's smut. Yes, there is taboo. However, there is a healthy amount of world building and character development. All-in-all, I am very much looking forward to how the story progresses.
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