unstable and inconsistent is what call this book lot of potential but gone because this story is all over the place. on stat he remember his last life but then he forgots everything. he moved to up. at 11 and start playing for them but he keep on saying he plays for Delhi all the way this just some of inconsistency........
Author how many chapters are you going to do about chole like common man are you going back to the main story or what anyway this novel is on of the best I've read good job and I hope you keep going
struggled to make it through the first chapter. this story needs alot of work and needs a over haul on both characters and world view building and development.
Uchiha Madara face was serious, while he could see with his Sharingan as under the skin in his hand the filament of profound energy was passing, he was docile as a small feline which seeks the warmth of his master, but was equally ferocious as a beast on the cusp of the food pyramid.
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