Five stars because I like my story.Welcome to my second novel!I already wrote and (nearly, depending on when you read this) finished my first novel Lightning Is the only Way at over 1300 chapters.There have been some mistakes in my first novel since it was, well, my first novel. This one is my second novel, and I rectified those mistakes.When I write, I mainly focus on emotions. It doesn't matter which one, power, loss, depression, happiness, whatever. I believe novels have to evoke emotions in the reader, and that's what I focus on. You can give me whatever feedback you want, as long as it's actual feedback. Have fun reading!
My review is base on what I read so far and also includes the review of some people who read in advance of this novel.1st the novel filler is to much I mean to much to handle author just insert chapters of nonsense like it was normal.2nd the characters are so prostrating to read. The mc was so far comical with the harem no touch attitude. If this was japanese I can understand that but as chinese novel it is a huge insult towards chinese harem. The mc womens are also hard to swallow the author seem to wanted to create a tsundare women but it mess up big time. As for the enemies imagine enemy you see at chaptet 10 or something you still see them around chapter 500. The author loves to save enemies and recycle them.3rd story development. This one was rather good at first. But the author just love to troll and keep making the story on a never ending loop. Keep on introducing hidden story line while living them unfinished.Finally it was a good story to pass time but a reader has a botton line as well and mine has perhaps cross it so i decide to give up and stop reading this..
Another full immersive online game where the character gets progressively stronger in his own way. However, the way it tackles mental pain and the idea of an NPC dying is much better than many novels. Currently looking forward to where the author takes Eldrian/Haru in the future. By 20 chapters in the novel picks up really well and can make you invested into the characters. I wish there was more than one chapter daily
kakakaka. I like such novels which go back in time and rebirthsWaiting for more chapters................................................................
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