I really hope the author continues the story. i just started reading it and i am already binging it. it's really good, it's got a realistic charm to an old formula. it's trying its best to be good, and the author is trying hard to give his characters time to flesh out. Thank you pls continue.
What I find the most interesting is the fact it's written first person which I find one of the hardest ways to write a story. I really love the concept and I hope the author keeps going with his perspective. This is a unique gem I think and feel this could go far. I def recommend it.
I loved this novel .There are few grammatical mistakes here and there but we can omit them. I just feel that the updating pattern is too slow 😭 . please update more .
Personally I think this one is worth a read. Everything about it is a cut above the rest. The author is clearly experienced and knows how to keep you invested. The characters and worldbuilding are all well done.
Novels tell stories but not this oneThis is a textbook where the author rambles about geography, it is either forest, ocean or mountain, don't be surprised if it is monotonous what with the severe lack of creativity The mc does a bunch of random things each chapter with no plan or goals, mc is hence bland and boring, as expected from a guy who monologues each chapterMc is an idiot which is common in novels where the mc has unlimited power but a mind of a 10 year old, this is the consequence of no character development after all how can you have character development with no conflict (overpowered mcs from the start rarely have conflicts) yet some authors can pull it of but not this one Overall it gives the impression that the author has no idea that there are readers, therefore spending each chapter rambling about random things with no flow or planning (why post a novel online when all you do is indulge in yourself)My conclusion: This is a textbook and not a novel, the only way to avoid this is to plan your work and get opinions from friends and readers.
Simply said, this is one of 3 4 books I'm willing to spend my coin (basically money) on for latter chapters. A worthwhile read and it's a pity I couldn't binge read it till the end. The background story caught my interest and the plot kept me reading. It's underrated to say the least and I believe it deserve much more attention than this.
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