Just started this story a few days ago and have to say, it's overall pretty good. Starting off with the merits would obviously include the fact the the MC is a villian so if you're looking for that, you'll get it here, the power system in the story has quite a bit of potential to be pretty interesting if the author goes more into it and the side characters at least by ch 31 so far seem to be interesting enough and they're not just useless backround characters. Though it does have it's demerits, one of which would include the story pace being a bit too fast at least earlier in the novel and due to that some of the formed character relationships in the story seem a bit abrupt and out of place for a bit. Also the fact the at least as far as i've read (chapter 31), the first few numbered chapters can nearly be skipped with the only real relavance they've had in the sotry being explaing the MC's personality a bit. Though overall it's a pretty good novel so far. But i'll have to keep reading to see if it gets any better in the future as it does a some potential.
This shi is good. Death note is one of my favorite anime and I find this story inspired from it. The plot is amazing and the execution is also good. Good work!
Hi, I like your word building author. It's easy to understand and of course, the choice of words. It is really better to use easy to understand terms. Gosh, this is excellency!
This story was a surprisingly thought-provoking read.The balance between light hearted moments and deeper, more narrative driven scenes was really done well.Author uses formatting of the text nicely and as a nice storytelling tool.The dialogue is really well done, it made me laugh a couple of times.I can definitely see the potential here, and I really hope the author keeps updating. Looking forward to it :)
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