I wrapped up my whole review in two line.a totally beta male, and even without power or with power he still will be beta male. if some one asked me what is masochistic like then, I will point my finger to this main character. pathetic.
Very original and different. For once not the same stale stories rehashed for the n'th time. Its a good mix between comedy slice of life like story with some more serious touches. It has a good bit of an OP main character while not making it boring. On top of that, its one if the few novels that not only get the feeling of a game environment right (and not make me feel like the author cant count to 10 or never played an MMO) but also doesnt treat its readers like 5 year olds and gives me 5 paragraphs explaining why 10+10 is supposed to be 20. It doesnt take an IT genius to read this, but it is also not dumbed down to a level that removes all depths of the games mechanics and possibilities. In my opinion this is one of the very few novel gems on the platform. Can only highly recommend it.
I love this book. I have lost count of how many times I have reread it. The writing quality isn’t the best, the characters (other than the main) are slightly 2-dimensional, and the overall plot is a bit cliche. HOWEVER, the character development is great, and the dialogue is natural. Mike definitely feels like an edgy, and neglected, kid just entering his rebellious phase, which most of you can relate too, I’m sure. This novel may be very rough around the edges, yet it keeps drawing me back due to how natural the characters feel, and how natural their decisions seem. Mike makes decisions that feel completely realistic for the angsty youngster he is. This is completely different from most novels on this platform where most characters are so forced it becomes painful to continue reading, or are so obviously written with minimal thought that I want to take away the author’s keyboard and beat them with it. Certainly, there are times reading this novel where I want to bonk the author on the head and ask, “What were you thinking???” Even still, I have come to thoroughly enjoy the experience of reading this novel. I am likely to continue rereading this novel many times to come.
Writing quality is goodWell designed charactersGood background setting. Chapter update stability is goodOverall the book is good. Keep up the good work author
Alright! Here’s my honest review on this story:In the first chapter, the spacing of the paragraphs sentences was horrible. But this gets fixed almost immediately in the chapters after that and I suprisingly didn’t see any flaws after that initial first chapter.I can say the characters seem interesting along with believable interactions in most scenes. Some people might believe the characters to be stupid, but they are just teenagers in the story at the moment. So them being stupid is very normal. Especially in the beginning.Currently, when writing this review, there is only 6 chapters released. Because of that, I haven’t seen enough of the story to know if there’s proper pacing or story development.Also, there needs to be more regular updates. At least for the first 20-30 chapters.This is the end of my honest review.
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