Horrible. While the idea behind the story is sound, the grammar makes it hard to get into. I mean, how can you constantly go back and forth with he and she? And not realise that you're doing it?
I highly recommend it, it entered my top 10, both the character and the story are very engaging.
this story has a lot of future!!!
Looking forward to more chapters and see how the MC's revenge goes.
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story falls in line with usual second chance vrmmo stories. the writing and overall story however is quite good and enjoyable.
only real downside for me is the grammar. it reads barely any better than a machine translation. if author could get a editor to help with his grammar this could easily become an amazing work.
if you are interested in this genre of fiction I'd recommend adding to your library, checking in every once and a whole, throwing a stone occasionally, and when author finally gets an editor you binge read this like there's no tomorrow.
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this story has a lot of future!!!
Looking forward to more chapters and see how the MC's revenge goes.
only real downside for me is the grammar. it reads barely any better than a machine translation. if author could get a editor to help with his grammar this could easily become an amazing work.
if you are interested in this genre of fiction I'd recommend adding to your library, checking in every once and a whole, throwing a stone occasionally, and when author finally gets an editor you binge read this like there's no tomorrow.