Its a pretty interesting read. Kinda OP MC with Gravity powers and author describes it as a fraction of his vast power. Pretty nice grammer. Nicely done world building. I have some complaints regarding him not using his gravity powers to its full potential, but I can tolerate them with the fact that its been only 2 weeks or so since he got his powers. Good luck.
my second and last review as an author for Biohuman... Man, I gotta say, its's such an honor to write something I've been ruminating on for years! Biohuman is finally ended and if you haven't read all of it or are waiting for it to finish, go and read! Now that I'm done with the book I can say characters are great. I like making relatable characters, different dynamics and putting them in a world not so different to ours. Lee Seng may not be the BEST character, but who isn't perfect? It's a slow read and the free chapters will really allow you to either push through it or not. Writing, in my opinion, does get better .there are mistakes as my eyes cannot see everything
as at chapter 65 I'm really struggling here I can see great potential in this novel but this isn't making any sense. The mc is a coward like severe coward and everyone his age is basically a drama queen everyone throwing temper tantrums out of the blue for little to ko reason. the people that bully him he doesn't even take revenge despite now having power. this novel just feels like I'm walking in a quagmire question after question and nothing ever gets explained literally nothing
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Just wanted to pop in and write one of these reviews like every author does (from what I've seen). I just wanted to, firstly, thank you all for reading Biohuman. It means a lot to me that there's people other than myself who are enjoying Biohuman (at times even disliking it.). It really does help solidify how real writing is. :) So thank you all for reading and following along Lee Seng's journey!
Just wanted to pop in and note some stuff since 270~ chapters have been released (wow!).
1. MC is whiny early on. It does taper off and I'm sorry he came off that way early on. I don't know what I was on but I wanted to show this duality with the MC early on and pretty much went overboard with it. 50-60 chapters in and it does taper off. His personality starts to shine through as a hothead and a patiently impatient person.
2. I feel like it's my lack of writing this but I'll specify here. He does have Fox ears. He's a fox boy and has powers that come into fruition because of that.
3. 270~ chapters in and there's a lot more exploration on Fox half and Protocol half. More exploration in other areas but you'll eventually understand more about both halves by the end of Volume 1.
I'll probably put another review out in the future, but I just wanted to clairfy some stuff and give thanks to supporting Biohuman! [img=recommend] It means a lot to me!
Put please do let me know what you personally want more/less of, what you want to explore, etc. I will try my best but I will say Volume 1 will come to an end... I don't know how much chapters will be before we hit that, but it will end and I do have something up for Volume 2. :)
Thanks for reading this far. Thanks for supporting.
Please do let me know of the following if you wish to voice your opinion on it:
- What you want more/less of
- Grammatical issues
- Spelling issues
the character sucks, is whiny, and to be honest it feels like a women from a self help group wrote this novel... (nothing against women author, i feel that the mc should be a woman from the latent male-male tension) i feel like my balls are shriveling up and my junk falling off reading about this p as in ussy. i think the writer should just write regular novels, this genre of writing is about escapism into fantasy not drag back into mental health clinic. sorry could not continue reading this trash.. i'll have to past on this.. also I suspect this is being busted artificially to get high ratings. please stop, this is very di
Question for the author, are you English speaking and do you write raw in English or is it translated? Your reviews read very well but the actual synopsis and the novel read very poorly like a swiftly done translation, I admire your dedication and creativity regardless.
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Just wanted to pop in and write one of these reviews like every author does (from what I've seen). I just wanted to, firstly, thank you all for reading Biohuman. It means a lot to me that there's people other than myself who are enjoying Biohuman (at times even disliking it.). It really does help solidify how real writing is. :) So thank you all for reading and following along Lee Seng's journey!
Just wanted to pop in and note some stuff since 270~ chapters have been released (wow!).
1. MC is whiny early on. It does taper off and I'm sorry he came off that way early on. I don't know what I was on but I wanted to show this duality with the MC early on and pretty much went overboard with it. 50-60 chapters in and it does taper off. His personality starts to shine through as a hothead and a patiently impatient person.
2. I feel like it's my lack of writing this but I'll specify here. He does have Fox ears. He's a fox boy and has powers that come into fruition because of that.
3. 270~ chapters in and there's a lot more exploration on Fox half and Protocol half. More exploration in other areas but you'll eventually understand more about both halves by the end of Volume 1.
I'll probably put another review out in the future, but I just wanted to clairfy some stuff and give thanks to supporting Biohuman! [img=recommend] It means a lot to me!
Put please do let me know what you personally want more/less of, what you want to explore, etc. I will try my best but I will say Volume 1 will come to an end... I don't know how much chapters will be before we hit that, but it will end and I do have something up for Volume 2. :)
Thanks for reading this far. Thanks for supporting.
Please do let me know of the following if you wish to voice your opinion on it:
- What you want more/less of
- Grammatical issues
- Spelling issues