Beyond The Water: Chosen Of the Holy Family (1)

I come here to read some relaxing slice of life novel but not to be stressed because of annoying events...now i regretted reading this....😭

The good:Translation quality and the stability of updates The bad:Character Design Beauties are everywhereHalf of the top 10 beauties are allies or enemys (China)World BackgroundIs completely overshadowed : -> Building costs, upgradesSrory DevelopmentMc gets everything, wins always and is incredibly luckyInconsistentThe wall had first 3 gates  later 4 Mc gets a sword and the sword skill , later its the spear and spear skillLuck of Mc is set to be bad but Mc is incredibly lucky -.-

Actually it was good. Really.I'm someone trying to be an author so i paid attention to the detail.It's really good, but i'm going to stop reading from Chap 918.If you ask me why? well i can't really stand this kind of twist. I like the story before but the twist....... no comment

Just to support this work.........................................................................................................

Great stuff, i enjoyed the story and the main character, so far I've read quite a few chapters, and I can definitely say I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!

What a cringey ass synopsis, watch this trash get picked by retardnovel.🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

Ah, so far, the book is alright; the writing is fine, the story is developing, but slowly, the character designs are alright, and the main character is just a normal smart boy with potential (who knows, maybe he'll get better later). It is advised for readers with a lot of patience, but even though it seems unexceptional, this book has a lot of potential if there is character development.

I'm new to reading and this novel seems interesting to me, I'll be fan number one hahaha