The story is interesting and has potential... I'm very intrigued by how the Hunter System would be as the story moves forward... However, the concept of the system itself needs a bit of background or introduction for readers who are not familiar and only starting to read system novels like me... Also, your book has so much dialogue, at least 75% I think. It kind of looks like a movie script or a manga / comic... It's not bad but when I try writing like that, I get a harsh rejection from my editor... "remember that you're writing a book not a script"... those are Webnovel's words from writing guidelines.
I fee soooo sorry for Kim. No one deserves to be treated so shabbily, most of all by her mother. I’m so disappointed in Kim’s mother. I hope by getting married, that will be her ticket to independence and the respect she deserves.
Girl please update faster ! This book is really good and I wanna know what happens next. I also wanna know what’s your schedule for the book. Will there be a book two as well? Sequel?
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