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I really like the setting of the novel. The first chapter had a vibe with it, am looking forward to what the author has in stock for us.[img=recommend]
Not going to lie, when you asked if I wanted to read this I didn't have high expectations but... I was thoroughly surprised. The prologue showed a great hook, I could feel her terror almost, the moment she gave up and decided to flee, the hopes that were given and taken from us... and then the MC's anger over things I won't spoil.
You do a great job of building a world and setting a mood. I can't think of any complaints beyond I want to see more about your characters and when's the next chapter out, I NEEDS IT! You don't need to hear it from me, but I'm going to say it anyway. I love your work.
First of all, I really love science fictions/movies. I love how the author is building the world background. I am hands down to the writing style and plot. READ this novel, its more than worth it. ♥️
So far, I really am loving this novel. The author really puts great thought and detail into each of the scenes and gives great emphasis on the scenes ambience for each scene. The first chapter itself was amazing to read and really caught my attention. Sci fi novels are one of my favorite genres so this will definitely be in my library for a long time. I can't wait to see where this novel will go! Keep the good work up author!
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If you see any grammatical error in my book, please point it out.
I'm open to critiques but please try to not be extremely harsh.
Thank you for taking the time out of your day to check out my book ❤️.
You do a great job of building a world and setting a mood. I can't think of any complaints beyond I want to see more about your characters and when's the next chapter out, I NEEDS IT! You don't need to hear it from me, but I'm going to say it anyway. I love your work.
Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
Hi! Over 11k authors joined SWA I, and had won over $200,000. This time we have launched SWA II, focusing on entertaining novels and raising the first prize to $50,000!
It is time to monetize your book! We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access of winning the grand prizes and hardcover publishing.
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